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Description
watercolor, acrylic and pen on rough paper
40x50 cm
Speed painting: www.facebook.com/photo.php?v=4…
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Image size
1520x1900px 1.79 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 450D
Shutter Speed
1/64 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
28 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jan 2, 2014, 11:07:19 AM
Sensor Size
13mm
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From my experience, it's generally the more advanced artists who request critiques. Your piece shows no exception.
The technique is really good. I love the gritty realism. What I'm about to request is something many artists show no attempt at pursuing, which is perfectly fine. I feel as if the focal point is supposed to be directed towards the beautiful colors below, but the white of the hair is distracting from that. Perhaps you should darken the hair - add more details, maybe? You seem to be doing a series with this styles, but maybe adding a bit more detail to the hair wouldn't 't hurt <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
This is your call, though. You did a wonderful job overall, so honestly there's very little to correct anyways <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>