Well first I'd like to point out right away that the color is attractive and wonderful. The figure leads us up to the face along with the use of the "stars". I'm really fond of the "surreal space" theme going on here and your other works. As much as I like watercolor technique in this, I believe that you could have pushed depth into the orangy spacy space in some way. And this could be pushed further with the use of the background. Maybe you're going for this kinda minimalist thing but if you really want it to stand out more, give it a background. Maybe the same watercolor technique but with complementary colors or some pencil pattern. Use more variance in the "stars" as well. Like size, color, and opacity for depth.
I really like this because I enjoy abstract art that sorta "looks for more" and because I've been working on similar art myself. Make more like this!
This work of art is truly amazing! I really love the fine line quality you put into this. Also like the colors in this piece, they go so well. Nice work! Anyways feel free to browse my art and keep on posting awesome art such as this