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She slowly crumbles by KlarEm She slowly crumbles by KlarEm
Oil on canvas.
50 x 60 cm


This is my first oil painting and I know it is not so good, but I'll try to improve.

However I hope you like it and please tell me what you think about it :)
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:iconmrbloo7z:
i find this work fascinating grate composition really like the coloring the space in this work is brilliant i think you should add more of those horizontal lines i felt like there is not enough of them also i think you should add more details but not to much i see you know how to play with those so ... grate work i did not like though the squares i think they are to stable this work looks like something relay mobile and in movement i really think they should be diffident kinds of shapes ( broken shapes ) cause it gives me the filling of something that is braking ... awesome work :)))
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:iconkatr14:
Is this really your first oil painting?! WOW I am impressed! I love and adore that it looks like this face is created with squares! I love the movement! I love the composition! I love the choice of colors! Simply put: GREAT JOB. The title: "She slowly crumbles" fits so damn perfectly. I think the concept is brilliant, and the technique amazing. I can not even see you haven´t painted with oil before. It looks like you have done it 100 times before. Unbelievable!!!! You definately should feel proud of this painting! It is so unbelievable amazing! So keep painting!!!!
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:iconpa3kpanda:
pa3kpanda Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
OMG! this is amazing!
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:iconamithehobbit:
AmiTheHobbit Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great stuff! Too bad I missed the critique time. ._.
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:iconheartinart:
heartinart Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very nice!
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:iconklarem:
KlarEm Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks a lot :hug:
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:iconmatbuk:
Matbuk Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013
great!
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Matbuk Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013
great!
www.whoartyou.net
www.facebook.com/whoartyou.net
a free selection for an artistic contest in Milan
check it!!!
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:iconbeckykelley:
BeckyKelley Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Student General Artist
Somehow this reminds me of iRobot. Is that weird?
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:iconpittyarte:
pittyarte Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
davvero una tecnica interessante!
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:iconklarem:
KlarEm Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Ti ringrazio :hug:
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:iconjenny-artascending:
Jenny-artascending Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is absolutely wonderful my dear.
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:iconklarem:
KlarEm Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you so very much! :hug: :)
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:iconemotionalybroken:
EmotionalyBroken Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
damn this is powerful :D
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:iconklarem:
KlarEm Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you so very much! :hug:
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:iconrizalhasan:
rizalhasan Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012
fantastic,sm art
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:iconklarem:
KlarEm Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks a lot! :hug:
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:iconrizalhasan:
rizalhasan Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
your art amaze me,it's very good
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:icon13-08-97:
13-08-97 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
'FIRST OIL PAINTING' ?

THIS IS A GREAT WORK !! I THINK 'she slowly crumbles' IS A DIGITAL ART !#amazingamazingamazing:iconmiseryplz: :iconotlplz:
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:iconklarem:
KlarEm Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
yes it is ^_^
thanks so much for your comment! very much appreciated :hug:
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:icon13-08-97:
13-08-97 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:icondurrhurrplz:
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:iconekusasxisxgod:
EKUSASxISxGOD Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i love this its creative
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:iconklarem:
KlarEm Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks so much :hug:
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:iconekusasxisxgod:
EKUSASxISxGOD Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem
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:iconaetere:
Aetere Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Student
great style and the colours are just wonderful
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:iconklarem:
KlarEm Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
oh thanks a million! glad you think so ^_^
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:iconandrekosslick:
andrekosslick Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful symbiose of the realistic portrait drawing styl with the surrealistic drawing elements.
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:iconklarem:
KlarEm Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks for your comment :hug: and sorry for the late reply!
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:iconniellae:
Niellae Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I don't really know what to think about this picture, somehow it's really abstract and at the same time it's quite realistic.
Okay, that doesn't really make sense xD
Anyhow, this picture is really awesome x3
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:iconklarem:
KlarEm Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
haha thank you so much for your comment!! much appreciated :hug:
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:iconriemea:
Riemea Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your first oil painting? It's very good! One can always improve of course, but this is a very good start ;) I especially like the colours and the way you used shapes to build the face. Well done!
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:iconklarem:
KlarEm Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Yes, this is my first oil painting :) anyway thank you so soo much for your nice comment! I appreciate it a lot :hug:
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:iconriemea:
Riemea Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You'll be doing more oil paintings I guess? I'm looking forward to seeing your improvement :) You're most welcome! :huggle:
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:iconklarem:
KlarEm Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
of course! the day before yesterday I started another oil painting and later I will insert the work in progress :) I hope you will like it! anyway thanks again! :hug:
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:iconriemea:
Riemea Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's great, I'm excited to see it :la:
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:iconklarem:
KlarEm Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
here it is: [link] and in a few days I will insert the finished painting ^_^
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:iconriemea:
Riemea Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like it! I'm looking forward to seeing the finished piece :)
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:iconcardfue:
cardfue Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Very unique!
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:iconklarem:
KlarEm Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks so much :)
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:iconcardfue:
cardfue Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You're very welcome:-)
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:iconnahrain:
nahrain Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
brilliant work..it is so great that your technique is still outstanding just as it was with your watercolors pieces..oil colors are very strong colors they can deliver more dark and provocative concepts, so your choice here to execute this idea with them was really a wise one..and hurray for the first time you're a very very skilled artist which means you can pretty much control any medium you use...well done:D
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:iconklarem:
KlarEm Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
wow, thank you for your nice words! I always appreciate your comments, thank you so very much :heart:
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:iconnahrain:
nahrain Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww this is so nice of you to say:iconloveloveplz:
And you are always welcome:D
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:iconklarem:
KlarEm Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks again :heart: :)
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:iconnahrain:
nahrain Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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:iconjbrenthill:
jbrenthill Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I love it!
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:iconklarem:
KlarEm Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks a lot! ^^
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:iconev-sta:
Ev-sta Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
awesome work!! :)
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:iconklarem:
KlarEm Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you so very much!! :)
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:iconev-sta:
Ev-sta Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
psssshhh anytime!
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nnicc Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Penso che sia bellissimo e che questo stile sia nuovo e originale.
Forse una maggiore definizione degli occhi, specie quello a sinistra, sarebbe stata di più forte effetto.
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:iconklarem:
KlarEm Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
oh ti ringrazio, sinceramente non pensavo potesse piacere così tanto.. infatti inizialmente ero indecisa se inserirlo oppure no :D
l'occhio sinistro l'ho volutamente fatto così, però effettivamente avrei anche potuto dettagliarlo maggiormente.. beh nei prossimi lavori cercherò di fare meglio ^^
comunque grazie per il tuo commento, mi ha fatto davvero molto piacere :)
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