i find this work fascinating grate composition really like the coloring the space in this work is brilliant i think you should add more of those horizontal lines i felt like there is not enough of them also i think you should add more details but not to much i see you know how to play with those so ... grate work i did not like though the squares i think they are to stable this work looks like something relay mobile and in movement i really think they should be diffident kinds of shapes ( broken shapes ) cause it gives me the filling of something that is braking ... awesome work ))
Is this really your first oil painting?! WOW I am impressed! I love and adore that it looks like this face is created with squares! I love the movement! I love the composition! I love the choice of colors! Simply put: GREAT JOB. The title: "She slowly crumbles" fits so damn perfectly. I think the concept is brilliant, and the technique amazing. I can not even see you haven´t painted with oil before. It looks like you have done it 100 times before. Unbelievable!!!! You definately should feel proud of this painting! It is so unbelievable amazing! So keep painting!!!!