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She slowly crumblesby *KlarEm

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Oil on canvas.
50 x 60 cm

This is my first oil painting and I know it is not so good, but I'll try to improve.

However I hope you like it and please tell me what you think about it

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Submitted on: September 25, 2012
Image Size: 355 KB
Resolution: 1614×2000

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Make: Canon
Model: Canon EOS 450D
Shutter Speed: 1/197 second
Aperture: F/11.0
Focal Length: 24 mm
ISO Speed: 800
Date Taken: September 25, 2012
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS4 Windows
Sensor Size: 8mm

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Critique by !cocoratscha101 Sep 25, 2012, 10:42:55 AM

I like this painting very much, it´s quite different to your usual style and therefore very interesting and special.
The colors are wonderful bright and it´s a good idea of yours to use black as a contrast, it makes the colors pop even more. I also like the eyes very much, especially the right one, it´s stare is very intensive - an effect that is - again - caused by the contrast between the light blue of the iris and the black eyelashes.
It´s a pity that the eye on the left hand side looks so smudged - but that actually is the only negative thing that comes to my mind when looking at this painting. So, for your first attempt of painting with oil - this is truly amazing! Keep it up!

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Critique by ~katr14 Sep 25, 2012, 8:22:23 AM

Is this really your first oil painting?! WOW I am impressed! I love and adore that it looks like this face is created with squares! I love the movement! I love the composition! I love the choice of colors! Simply put: GREAT JOB. The title: "She slowly crumbles" fits so damn perfectly. I think the concept is brilliant, and the technique amazing. I can not even see you haven´t painted with oil before. It looks like you have done it 100 times before. Unbelievable!!!! You definately should feel proud of this painting! It is so unbelievable amazing! So keep painting!!!!