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Il pianto dell'Universo by KlarEm Il pianto dell'Universo by KlarEm
watercolor, acrylic and pen on rough paper
40x50 cm



other works: 
Too many thoughts crowd my mind... by KlarEm The Girl with the starry mantle by KlarEmFeel ashamed by KlarEm


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Critique by SPIDERBINDER Jan 2, 2014, 4:17:52 PM
From my experience, it's generally the more advanced artists who request critiques. Your piece shows no exception.
The technique is really good. I love the gritty realism. What I'm about to request is something many artists show no attempt at pursuing, which is perfectly fine. I feel as if the focal point is supposed to be directed towards the beautiful colors below, but the white of the hair is distracting from that. Perhaps you should darken the hair - add more details, maybe? You seem to be doing a series with this styles, but maybe adding a bit more detail to the hair wouldn't 't hurt :)
This is your call, though. You did a wonderful job overall, so honestly there's very little to correct anyways :)
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henriqueart Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Professional
lindo trabalhoClap 
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FanArtistik Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Professional Interface Designer
Interesting job with colors. Always nice.
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Harri-Jm Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
gorgeous!
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angellover64 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
I would love to hear fans of Chiara's work, share their interpratations of this piece.  
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HaruNicole Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
simply beautiful
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mangojellodraws Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, that's amazing.
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touchofthesoul Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very
 impressive work!!
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chuotcon96 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My goodness! The beauty!
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